After receiving some feedback on my work, and working with the idea of my audience still being females, age 45-54, who are in a relationship, have a high-school level education, are involved with Blogs and Social Media, and have an income between $60,000 – $89,000.
I adjusted the two images for my Sharpie ad. Mostly I re-sized the text all around and made some adjustments in placement also as a result of needing to fit the larger text.
I also made some small adjustments to the sizing and placement of the planet image to make it look a little different and hopefully more natural.
Below you will find the adjusted images: